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Challenge: [86] In Someone Else's Arms
Title: Looking Back
Word Count: 248
Notes: Umm... I doubt there are any spoilers. Demyx-centric. Beta'd by the lovely [livejournal.com profile] lindskaba.



When he joined the Organization, they were explicit about one thing: You’re nobody now. Don’t look back.

And he’d obeyed this mostly, but his dreams had wills all their own. Once, he chanced asking Axel about his “memories.” The rather annoyed looking red-head told him to get over it; to everyone in his memories, Demyx was already dead.

With that in mind, he tried to forget. Dutifully he practiced controlling water and navigating darkness; he even took up fighting, though a voice inside warned it was something he—or his other—would’ve never done. Despite his attempts for normalcy, that place still haunted him.

So one day he opened a portal to find his way back.


Walking down the road of a foreign memory, he desperately searches for something. It doesn’t take him long to find her: sitting on the bench they used to sit on, laughing in the way they used to laugh, holding someone else the way she once held him.

Demyx watches and they don’t notice, caught up in the oblivious bliss of young love. As he looks on he finds himself searching inside for some sort of spark, some stirring of anything: jealousy, anger, sorrow. Nothing comes.

With a last glance, he walks back down the street and veers off into a small alleyway, opening a portal to the World that Never Was; the notions of the home he never had finally leave him for good.

He is Nobody, and nothing is his destiny.

Date: 2006-12-09 08:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lazzchan.livejournal.com
Oooooooooh

*sparkly eyes* I <3 this--

Date: 2006-12-11 04:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aishiteru.livejournal.com
LMFAO I was about to read the drabble when I saw your icon and laughed out love XD I WANT IT AND CAN I STEAL IT BECAUSE IT IS AWESOME?

Date: 2006-12-11 04:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lazzchan.livejournal.com
*giggles*

Sure, just credit. ^___^

*luffs her Demyx icon*

Date: 2006-12-10 01:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] puffinboy415.livejournal.com
I love the word normalcy. I've never heard it before... wonder y? Anyway, this is a great back story in only 250 words! It gave enough detail into Demyx' past to understand everything and that was all we needed. I really like this one... *cries emotionally*

Date: 2006-12-10 02:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] questofdreams.livejournal.com
I love Demyx and I love how that all played out. I don't normally see fic about nobodies confirming that they don't feel, so this was perfect and written so well too ^_^ Awesome job!

Date: 2006-12-10 06:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lorei.livejournal.com
Very nice, I love IC!Demyx. The last line, though...:wibbles:

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