challenge 91

[lazzchan.livejournal.com]

Challenge: [091] Invincible
Title: Even the Strong Fall
Word Count: 100

Notes: Not really spoilerish, it's kinda vague. Unless you don't know what Sora did during the second game at all, you'll be fine. ^_^ And whoo! A perfect hundered words. When has that happened to me before?



They thought they could never be defeated because they were the ones that survived when their hearts were taken They were the ones that lived, retained their sense of self, strong—not weak.

As time went on, doubt began to creep into their minds. Those that had once stepped above the rest of the masses they controlled fell one by one. Once having lived with strong enough hearts to create a Nobody, they were each taken down, everything they are swept away to the dark.

Each relentless swing of the Keyblade destroyed those that once thought themselves to be invincible.

Comments

[kangaroop.livejournal.com]

A perfect 100 words! That's amazing! (says the girl who can't keep anything under 500 words)

I loved it :) This made me feel bad for the Organization. Yep, even the strongest fall one day (I wonder if Sora will fall someday too O_O).

[lazzchan.livejournal.com]

^__^

Thank you~ this stuck in the back of my head; glad to see you liked it. =D

And I can never do 100 words straight, it's the hardest thing ever for me. XD

[jarlain.livejournal.com]

*gives many shiny things* This was really good. Nice look on Nobodies. *sniffles* After I read this I went and watched the cut scenes and it right on bat. *all they wanted was to be loved.*

[lorei.livejournal.com]

Oh..poor Organization D: But you wrote this wonderfully, with only 100 words, too!

[lazzchan.livejournal.com]

^___^

Thank you~

[tabitha-dornoc.livejournal.com]

Let me have the '100 word' squee, yaaay. I like your articulation of the concept, because you're right, the Organization does seem to have this invincibility complex, though I'm not sure it's ever taken from them. They all pretty much die thinking they can win do the very end. I really like this line: they were each taken down, everything they are swept away to the dark, except that the sudden 'are' in a drabble written in the past tense is a little jarring. But I know what you mean by it. And, hee, I'm still happy with the 100 word count! XD