In terms of this drabble, I really liked the originality behind it. It's bizarre to me that Kairi wasn't mentioned, and I think that it would have added a more 'well-rounded' feel to it. Sometimes it seems that your sentences are a little run-on, but you're eloquent and that's so refreshing.
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Date: 2007-03-31 06:44 pm (UTC)