[Feedback Post]

[wrong.livejournal.com]

To commemorate the 100th challenge at kh_drabble (as well as all sorts of other things), we'll be having this nifty thing called the Feedback Post. Basically, this is a cumulative feedback post, where people (both signed in and anonymous) can give feedback to any author. Basically, in order to participate in it, all you need to be is an author who has posted in this community before (because it's a feedback post, duh.)

For Those Who Want Feedback
1. Put your username down in the comments.
2. It is up to you, but I think it would be helpful if you put links to your latest drabbles. It is up to you, of course.
3. Do enable comment notification, because anonymous comments will be screened.
4. Do feedback to others too, especially if you like receiving your own feedback!

For Those Who Are Giving Feedback
1. Basically, general comments on their writing style, ideas, creativity? I know all of us here are authors, or at the very least, readers, so we do have an idea of what writing is like and how someone can improve. Even better, tell someone their positive points, because we all need a little ego boost now and then.
2. Slanderous reviews will be deleted. Just because it is anonymous doesn't mean that you can shoot your mouth any way you like. If people take advantage of it then anonymous reviewing will be turned off.

I hope that this would be useful and constructive to the participants of this community, but most of all, really fun as well.

So get to it!

(Oh, and if anyone wants to use this to feedback to the moderators about anything in the community, I suppose this is a good time as any to do so. Thanks.)

Comments

[lapifors.livejournal.com]

Sounds good :]

Turn of Century (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/489179.html#cutid1) For 'One Hundred.'

[i-got-spunk.livejournal.com]

In terms of this drabble, I really liked the originality behind it. It's bizarre to me that Kairi wasn't mentioned, and I think that it would have added a more 'well-rounded' feel to it. Sometimes it seems that your sentences are a little run-on, but you're eloquent and that's so refreshing.

[lapifors.livejournal.com]

I actually just *facepalmed* at myself because I had totally not realised that I'd forgotten Kairi. I usually like to give her a mention because I think she's not really appreciated enough. Cheers for that :) next time I'll be sure to include her. And yes... I am guilty of the run of sentences... I'll work on that as well.

[lunarflight.livejournal.com]

First of all...your tense is ALL OVER THE PLACE. XD It's not so horrible that it drives me crazy, but it is distracting at times to figure out whether we're talking about the past, the present, the distant past, or what.

But I really like the idea of this one and the feeling of years on Merlin. I love the line about Riku, don't ask me entirely why. The characters are good (though yes, the lack of Kairi is SAD XD), the idea is great. Mostly you just need to go through, examine your tense, and tighten up the language in a few places.

[lapifors.livejournal.com]

Ahahaa yeah, my tenses are terrible. It's because at the moment I'm reading this series of books which are in the present tense, and I tend to mimic the style of the author I've just been reading in whatever I'm writing, but as I usually write in the past tense, everything gets muddled. I usually try to go through and pick out any tense mistakes, I thought I'd got them all for this piece, obviously not!

Thanks :) this was helpful.

[kunoichi-life.livejournal.com]

I also find it a little weird that Kairi wasn't mention. I guess that might be because I really see them as a trio and where Sora goes, Riku and Kairi inevitably follow.... but the drabble was really well done. It's an original idea I haven't seen done before now, and it was well executed. It makes the heart ache. Well written!