[Feedback Post]

[wrong.livejournal.com]

To commemorate the 100th challenge at kh_drabble (as well as all sorts of other things), we'll be having this nifty thing called the Feedback Post. Basically, this is a cumulative feedback post, where people (both signed in and anonymous) can give feedback to any author. Basically, in order to participate in it, all you need to be is an author who has posted in this community before (because it's a feedback post, duh.)

For Those Who Want Feedback
1. Put your username down in the comments.
2. It is up to you, but I think it would be helpful if you put links to your latest drabbles. It is up to you, of course.
3. Do enable comment notification, because anonymous comments will be screened.
4. Do feedback to others too, especially if you like receiving your own feedback!

For Those Who Are Giving Feedback
1. Basically, general comments on their writing style, ideas, creativity? I know all of us here are authors, or at the very least, readers, so we do have an idea of what writing is like and how someone can improve. Even better, tell someone their positive points, because we all need a little ego boost now and then.
2. Slanderous reviews will be deleted. Just because it is anonymous doesn't mean that you can shoot your mouth any way you like. If people take advantage of it then anonymous reviewing will be turned off.

I hope that this would be useful and constructive to the participants of this community, but most of all, really fun as well.

So get to it!

(Oh, and if anyone wants to use this to feedback to the moderators about anything in the community, I suppose this is a good time as any to do so. Thanks.)

Comments

sweeeeeeeeeet

[i-got-spunk.livejournal.com]

Awesome ideas, guys!

Some recent works:
[100] (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/489372.html#cutid1)
[085] (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/406808.html)
[083] (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/391898.html)


Thanks in advance :33333

[lapifors.livejournal.com]

Sounds good :]

Turn of Century (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/489179.html#cutid1) For 'One Hundred.'

[misskass.livejournal.com]

*pops in before running off to bed*

Me please! This is an awesome idea. =)

[092] - Feathers (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/447110.html)
[091] - Invincible (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/444652.html)
[071] - Castles (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/321276.html)

[unsafebet.livejournal.com]

Oh geeze, it's been ages since I've posted here. :/
Here are the four I've written for here:

[009] (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/37835.html)
[010] (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/40319.html)
[013] (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/56350.html)
[018] (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/74043.html)

I really need to finish those 40 drabbles I promised.

[jaydesummers.livejournal.com]

Anything for the sake of improvement! :D

[91] - Invincible (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/443777.html)
[54] - Choices (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/206730.html)
[57} - Completion (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/217455.html)

:D I think there's some others but I went memory diving for those three. XD

[dusknobody.livejournal.com]

...I can never remember what I actually posted and in which order, so here are a random three. I promise to respond to everyone else at some later time, although I will likely do it anonymously, simply for the sake of amusement. ♥ (I like trying to guess who left what comment...)

All Fall Down (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/384625.html)
Flurry of Flame (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/415955.html)
Wrong (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/339535.html)

[lorei.livejournal.com]

This is an interesting idea...I'll offer feedback myself, a bit later when I've got more time :D

eighty-five (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/403626.html)
eight-six (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/409456.html)
ninety-seven (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/474580.html)

Hmmm, funnishness!

[kashuarashi.livejournal.com]

Heh, this looks like fun. Okay then, stuff I've done:

[95]Testing
[98]Mother
[99]Fungus Among Us

And, because I'm using this icon:

[67] Delusions

(I keep forgetting I actually entered that thing as a challange entry...Oo;;) (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/466323.html) (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/476163.html) (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/486955.html) (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/283502.html)

[aetherae.livejournal.com]

:D Me likey thiiis. XD

Recent works:
[100] One-hundred (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/491699.html)
[99] Sidequests (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/485430.html)
[98] Mother (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/478324.html)
[98] Mother (2nd post) (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/481347.html)

[lunarflight.livejournal.com]

Hmm, it'd be nice to get some feedback to know what the community is looking for in its drabbles, since I'm still fairly new here.

[099] (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/487762.html)
[098] (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/479449.html)

Really would like some crits on 99, as I'm still working on getting a feel of those characters and I want to know how my characterization is.

Crits on the second one (98, challenge for Mother) aren't really necessary, though, as that drabble was done purely for entertainment. XD

[kunoichi-life.livejournal.com]

This is such a great idea :3.

Here are my batch...

[071] The Storyteller (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/319935.html)
[097] Resolute (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/473559.html)
[098] Company (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/480368.html)

[euphonious-glow.livejournal.com]

Hi there. If anyone is interested in giving me some feedback on my writing style, plot, characterization, etc. here are the links to some of my newest entries in this community. I like tough crit, so don't be afraid to point out the little details. I would really like to improve in any way I can.

[081] - Trick or Treat (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/379683.html)
[083] - Reflection (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/389441.html)
[084] - Dust (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/396424.html)
[087] - Snow (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/416454.html)
[088] - Tomorrow (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/423453.html)
[094] - Conspiracy (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/457760.html)
[095] - Poison (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/463707.html)

[lazzchan.livejournal.com]

Well, I could do this whole "let's leave feedback" post-- =D Since I am a mod and it'd be nice to actually, y'know---participate in this idea. *laughs*

the sky's the limit 73 (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/329730.html)

Dance 75 (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/341913.html)

Tidying Up 78 (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/361104.html)

Shadow 79 (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/368689.html)

annnnnnd just because one last one is needed (for some odd reason in my brain) feedback on the winning entry I had, just b/c I'd like to how it was winning? lol

Crossroads 82 (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/385654.html)

[nirvana-falling.livejournal.com]

:D feedbackz plz, lol.

But seriously. Here's links. Love them.

placebo (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/466072.html)
year without light (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/453054.html)
like the sun (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/443230.html)
place that used to breathe (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/438063.html)
mine to save (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/431223.html)
belong with me (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/426389.html)

...just a few. Sorry.