[Feedback Post]

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To commemorate the 100th challenge at kh_drabble (as well as all sorts of other things), we'll be having this nifty thing called the Feedback Post. Basically, this is a cumulative feedback post, where people (both signed in and anonymous) can give feedback to any author. Basically, in order to participate in it, all you need to be is an author who has posted in this community before (because it's a feedback post, duh.)

For Those Who Want Feedback
1. Put your username down in the comments.
2. It is up to you, but I think it would be helpful if you put links to your latest drabbles. It is up to you, of course.
3. Do enable comment notification, because anonymous comments will be screened.
4. Do feedback to others too, especially if you like receiving your own feedback!

For Those Who Are Giving Feedback
1. Basically, general comments on their writing style, ideas, creativity? I know all of us here are authors, or at the very least, readers, so we do have an idea of what writing is like and how someone can improve. Even better, tell someone their positive points, because we all need a little ego boost now and then.
2. Slanderous reviews will be deleted. Just because it is anonymous doesn't mean that you can shoot your mouth any way you like. If people take advantage of it then anonymous reviewing will be turned off.

I hope that this would be useful and constructive to the participants of this community, but most of all, really fun as well.

So get to it!

(Oh, and if anyone wants to use this to feedback to the moderators about anything in the community, I suppose this is a good time as any to do so. Thanks.)

Comments

[lunarflight.livejournal.com]

92: The second line, discussing the senses in the dark is rather awkward in places, particularly with the way you're using tense. I think it's grammatically correct, but it's still awkward to read. I love the idea and it's a very beautiful little drabble. In a lot of ways, however, you almost over use the feather imagery. You only have to say it once for us to get the idea and once is all you need to qualify for the weekly drabble. Very cute, though, very touching.

91: I'm very amused how you used the prompt in this one. It gives an interesting frame work for the piece and handling what's happening. Simple, but creative and effective.

71: DAAAAW. Very cute, but also emotional and touching with that ending line. On a note about that ending line, though, it's a bit funky. Worded a little differently, it might be stronger. I love the scenes from the past, those were so adorable. Some descriptions of the castles would have been nice, but still, the piece works well as it is.