[Feedback Post]

[wrong.livejournal.com]

To commemorate the 100th challenge at kh_drabble (as well as all sorts of other things), we'll be having this nifty thing called the Feedback Post. Basically, this is a cumulative feedback post, where people (both signed in and anonymous) can give feedback to any author. Basically, in order to participate in it, all you need to be is an author who has posted in this community before (because it's a feedback post, duh.)

For Those Who Want Feedback
1. Put your username down in the comments.
2. It is up to you, but I think it would be helpful if you put links to your latest drabbles. It is up to you, of course.
3. Do enable comment notification, because anonymous comments will be screened.
4. Do feedback to others too, especially if you like receiving your own feedback!

For Those Who Are Giving Feedback
1. Basically, general comments on their writing style, ideas, creativity? I know all of us here are authors, or at the very least, readers, so we do have an idea of what writing is like and how someone can improve. Even better, tell someone their positive points, because we all need a little ego boost now and then.
2. Slanderous reviews will be deleted. Just because it is anonymous doesn't mean that you can shoot your mouth any way you like. If people take advantage of it then anonymous reviewing will be turned off.

I hope that this would be useful and constructive to the participants of this community, but most of all, really fun as well.

So get to it!

(Oh, and if anyone wants to use this to feedback to the moderators about anything in the community, I suppose this is a good time as any to do so. Thanks.)

Comments

[lunarflight.livejournal.com]

Hmm, it'd be nice to get some feedback to know what the community is looking for in its drabbles, since I'm still fairly new here.

[099] (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/487762.html)
[098] (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/479449.html)

Really would like some crits on 99, as I'm still working on getting a feel of those characters and I want to know how my characterization is.

Crits on the second one (98, challenge for Mother) aren't really necessary, though, as that drabble was done purely for entertainment. XD

[lorei.livejournal.com]

With 99, it seems more like Demyx talking then Axel. I think it's got something to do with all the exclamation points you tacked on his dialogue -- he's more manipulative then eager, besides, it would be just fine to have no exclamation points at all. They give a weird, semi-comic feel to a drabble that's over-all more serious. Xemnas is..not bad, persay, but boring. He's more of a talking head then a character in that one. (It's not bad, exactly, since he's not the main focus, but the characterization is too weak for me to decide if I like it or not.)

[lunarflight.livejournal.com]

I THOUGHT there were too many exclamation points when I wrote that. -__-; I should so know better than to abuse exclamation points like that.

Thank you, I'll definitely keep all of that in mind.

[aetherae.livejournal.com]

I agree with lorei. I think you used too many exclamation points, making Axel seem...not really Axel. Love the last line though. XD

And, umm, Xemnas...I think he should have been, uh, more...speechy? XD I don't know, but Xemnas just really likes to talk for hours on end and I think he seemed a little too...normal in there. I'm not sure, I'm still a newbie as well. XD