[Feedback Post]

[wrong.livejournal.com]

To commemorate the 100th challenge at kh_drabble (as well as all sorts of other things), we'll be having this nifty thing called the Feedback Post. Basically, this is a cumulative feedback post, where people (both signed in and anonymous) can give feedback to any author. Basically, in order to participate in it, all you need to be is an author who has posted in this community before (because it's a feedback post, duh.)

For Those Who Want Feedback
1. Put your username down in the comments.
2. It is up to you, but I think it would be helpful if you put links to your latest drabbles. It is up to you, of course.
3. Do enable comment notification, because anonymous comments will be screened.
4. Do feedback to others too, especially if you like receiving your own feedback!

For Those Who Are Giving Feedback
1. Basically, general comments on their writing style, ideas, creativity? I know all of us here are authors, or at the very least, readers, so we do have an idea of what writing is like and how someone can improve. Even better, tell someone their positive points, because we all need a little ego boost now and then.
2. Slanderous reviews will be deleted. Just because it is anonymous doesn't mean that you can shoot your mouth any way you like. If people take advantage of it then anonymous reviewing will be turned off.

I hope that this would be useful and constructive to the participants of this community, but most of all, really fun as well.

So get to it!

(Oh, and if anyone wants to use this to feedback to the moderators about anything in the community, I suppose this is a good time as any to do so. Thanks.)

Comments

[jaydesummers.livejournal.com]

Anything for the sake of improvement! :D

[91] - Invincible (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/443777.html)
[54] - Choices (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/206730.html)
[57} - Completion (http://community.livejournal.com/kh_drabble/217455.html)

:D I think there's some others but I went memory diving for those three. XD

[(Anonymous)]

[91] is hands down the best. The only thing to really say about it is the next to last line needs a question mark. The concept is peaceful, yet relaxing, the imagery is well done. It's a good piece.

[57] is likewise good, although there are points where the imagery doesn't click quite as well. I can't tell you why, which is irritating, but something in the word choice seems...off.

[54] was a good concept, but your imagery and voice isn't really there. Rather than hearing Riku think these thoughts, we're told he thought them. Also, "the boys mind was made up. Turning around, Riku nodded as his mind was finally made up. For good or bad, better or for worse, Riku had made up his mind", is extreamly repetative and it doesn't add anything to the rhythm. Of course, this was also the first of the pieces, so it stands to reason that it's the weakest.

[jaydesummers.livejournal.com]

xD! Well I'm pretty sure I can go in and put in a silly little question mark! ♥ Imagery is one of my weaker points in writing and I've been trying to get better with it but alas... I'll just have to keep plugging away at it! :O

Oh look, my little friend Redundancy paid me a visit that day! XD My one true writing weakness. .__.

Thank yoooooou!