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[okami-hu.livejournal.com]

Wow. When inspiration hits, it hits with a brick. ^^ Second entry!

Challenge: [101] Puppet
Title: Dancefloor Confession
Word Count: 107


Puppets we are, we dance away, twirling like butterflies on thin air. Round and round, the music calls, we play a game, the one who slips, falls. Wilder and slower, we move so swiftly, we're waltzing on water, careless and freely. But the steps are not easy, don't be a fool, we're just as useful as any other tool; we'll swing you, we'll break you with style and grace, wrapping you in a deadly embrace. Cut us down, child, and we will rise, before you started, you should have been wise! Puppets on loose strings, that's what we are, moved by the sound of our master's sitar.

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It started out with the Dancers but I switched to the Clones/Sprites halfway. It was a better fit. ^^

Comments

[kavakavan.livejournal.com]

Whoa. . . That was like, six kinds of awesome. Serious, I really like this. Also, I totally envy anyone who can write in verse. This sounds like it could be put to music~

[okami-hu.livejournal.com]

If it does, then I definitely succeeded. ^_^ And, considering English is not my native tongue, I feel twice as accomplished. I'm glad you liked. ^_^