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Challenge: 112, Enchant.
Title: That Which Enchants.
Word Count: 343
(anything else): Quote at the end is from Plato. ♥


It’s enchanting, the way the man fights so gracefully. Red and black blurs in the street, always managing to bring such destruction.

It’s enchanting, the way he really is such a great shooter. The way his yellow eyes pierce through him and almost paralyze him.

It’s enchanting, the way he flies so gracefully through the air, able to bring such chaos and panic.

It’s enchanting, the way he’s so intelligent and yet such a fool. He’s unable to melt – but ice reacts to fire in such a beautiful and deadly way.

It’s enchanting, the way he’s so big and yet is able to fight with such speed. His power is immense – it’s hypnotic, almost.

It’s enchanting, the way he leafs through the book and picks his target. They really shouldn’t underestimate the power of such a “fragile” weapon.

It’s enchanting, the way his eyes glimmer, the way they shine, bright and waiting under the moon. And yet, it’s such a… an almost forbidden thought, the way the moon changes him so.

It’s enchanting, the way he moves and how he fights. It’s awe-inspiring; be careful, fly too close and you’ll burn.

It’s enchanting, the way such a beautiful thing could be the downfall of the Keyblade Master. Water flows through him, and before he knows it, he’s ready.

It’s enchanting, the way he uses such an unlikely weapon. But he uses it so well; time is running out, you better hurry.

It’s enchanting, the way he uses such a dirty tactic. But for a rose, it’s never dirty, just a beautiful and natural thing.

It’s enchanting, the way lightning courses through her, making her even more dangerous. Knives and electricity really make such a deadly combination.

It’s enchanting… he’s not supposed to have gone to that world, no, that’s why flames surround him and bring him close, they don’t burn, there’s not enough time to mess around, come back to us.

It’s enchanting, but so horrible, so terrifying… to see them all fade.

After all, everything that deceives may be said to enchant.

Date: 2007-07-13 06:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] masakomoonshade.livejournal.com
The imagery you've used here is beautiful, and I love the way you've repeated those first words over and over, and then Plato's line in the end.

It's fantastic. Good job.

Date: 2007-07-13 11:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lindskaba.livejournal.com
The Plato quote works so well for this challenge. Way to use it ♥

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