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kh_drabbleChallenge: [135] Disaster
Title: 20x Ridiculous
Wordcount: 469
Notes: Disaster -> Danger -> Is it fourth-wall tiem agin nao? I couldn't resist :D Think of this as a follow-up to this drabble ;)
Warnings: Profanity, KHII spoilers.
Sora -- what was that -- Sora needed help -- oh shit!!!
Riku screamed (did he, though?) and said some bad bad words, enough to make even a sixteen-year-old boy blush, and then he realized, no he didn't, because he was under someone-something's else's control again, and that was what made him say it.
It was like -- like when he had been possessed. His limbs weren't fully his and his weapon wasn't under his control. And yet, this invader wasn't anything like Ansem. Where Ansem's spirit had felt sadistic and cold and bad, this spirit (or whatever) felt sweet and good and very, very involved in something beyond just Riku. And honestly? It's invading him felt, well...about twenty times more ridiculous then Ansem's had.
He was going to scream, "Who are you?" or "Get out!!" when he remembered, just a few moments ago, Sora charging head-on into a wall and, in response to Riku's laughter, insisting that "it wasn't my fault! It was that dumb thing that's supposed to be helping me."
These words were absolutely accusational, but before Riku had had time to ask if, maybe Sora had turned mental or something, Xemnas had started throwing skyscrapers and stuff at them and the 'dumb thing' seemed to disappear.
Not disappeared, he realized now, but rather got back on task. Now the whatever-it-was had been expelled from Sora, and it was going to help Riku. Yes?
It was making him to jump and run to avoid the screen Xemnas kept throwing up, but it seemed more then willing to answer him, too.
Glad you realized it! Much quicker then Sora -- oh crap, kid, why can't you block?!
It was running him towards Sora but he never seemed to be getting closer. Much as the invasion was interesting, he figured he could have pulled Sora free about five minutes ago, on his own.
Where the hell is your heal?! It demanded, starting to panic, again. What about your items!!
"Why should that matter," Riku hissed out loud, feeling someone throw his body around Xemnas' Clonenas just in time. He wasn't feeling so good. "So long as I can stand, we can save him!"
About that, you dumb shit!! Your health is dropping, I think and you've got no magic and -- oh goddamn it oh crap oh shit shit shit, Riku! This is a--
A what?! He didn't understand. But then he realized -- where the hell is Xemnas Two -- and Sora was farther away then ever, somehow. There wasn't time for a whatever it was worried about!
Well. All the angles shifted and
then
Riku saw the mess of lasers. Maybe a disaster. It said.
As the lasers came nearer faster and he heard the siren-sound that meant he was injured bad, he couldn't help but to take a page out of the obscene invader's book and say the word -- "Fuck!"
Title: 20x Ridiculous
Wordcount: 469
Notes: Disaster -> Danger -> Is it fourth-wall tiem agin nao? I couldn't resist :D Think of this as a follow-up to this drabble ;)
Warnings: Profanity, KHII spoilers.
Sora -- what was that -- Sora needed help -- oh shit!!!
Riku screamed (did he, though?) and said some bad bad words, enough to make even a sixteen-year-old boy blush, and then he realized, no he didn't, because he was under someone-something's else's control again, and that was what made him say it.
It was like -- like when he had been possessed. His limbs weren't fully his and his weapon wasn't under his control. And yet, this invader wasn't anything like Ansem. Where Ansem's spirit had felt sadistic and cold and bad, this spirit (or whatever) felt sweet and good and very, very involved in something beyond just Riku. And honestly? It's invading him felt, well...about twenty times more ridiculous then Ansem's had.
He was going to scream, "Who are you?" or "Get out!!" when he remembered, just a few moments ago, Sora charging head-on into a wall and, in response to Riku's laughter, insisting that "it wasn't my fault! It was that dumb thing that's supposed to be helping me."
These words were absolutely accusational, but before Riku had had time to ask if, maybe Sora had turned mental or something, Xemnas had started throwing skyscrapers and stuff at them and the 'dumb thing' seemed to disappear.
Not disappeared, he realized now, but rather got back on task. Now the whatever-it-was had been expelled from Sora, and it was going to help Riku. Yes?
It was making him to jump and run to avoid the screen Xemnas kept throwing up, but it seemed more then willing to answer him, too.
Glad you realized it! Much quicker then Sora -- oh crap, kid, why can't you block?!
It was running him towards Sora but he never seemed to be getting closer. Much as the invasion was interesting, he figured he could have pulled Sora free about five minutes ago, on his own.
Where the hell is your heal?! It demanded, starting to panic, again. What about your items!!
"Why should that matter," Riku hissed out loud, feeling someone throw his body around Xemnas' Clonenas just in time. He wasn't feeling so good. "So long as I can stand, we can save him!"
About that, you dumb shit!! Your health is dropping, I think and you've got no magic and -- oh goddamn it oh crap oh shit shit shit, Riku! This is a--
A what?! He didn't understand. But then he realized -- where the hell is Xemnas Two -- and Sora was farther away then ever, somehow. There wasn't time for a whatever it was worried about!
Well. All the angles shifted and
then
Riku saw the mess of lasers. Maybe a disaster. It said.
As the lasers came nearer faster and he heard the siren-sound that meant he was injured bad, he couldn't help but to take a page out of the obscene invader's book and say the word -- "Fuck!"
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Date: 2008-02-02 10:45 pm (UTC)They're not coming. But it was amazing. I'm trying really hard not to crack up at work, and it's not exactly working. XDb
And I like your icon. :D Win all around!
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Date: 2008-02-03 05:17 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-02-02 11:13 pm (UTC)This is amazing, so amazing that it deserves sparkles.
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Date: 2008-02-03 05:18 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-02-03 05:20 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-02-03 05:22 am (UTC)Thank you for commenting!! Glad you enjoyed the story~
XD
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Date: 2008-02-03 05:49 am (UTC)I'm more apt to throw the controller at the tv, however.Pfft, we don't need no stinkin' fourth wall. <3
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Date: 2008-02-04 03:33 am (UTC)hahaha always yesNaaaah <3
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Date: 2008-02-03 11:24 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-02-04 03:39 am (UTC)Of course, the greatness of having such a poorly defined 'character' means that s/he can be playing in any situation imaginable, so hell...could be final mix. If
youThe Player wants it to be.no subject
Date: 2008-02-03 03:41 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-02-04 03:41 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-02-04 04:09 pm (UTC)*totally would have left the rescuing just to Riku if she could've*Different reactions, whee!
…uh, also, the comic ideas are still somewhere in the back of my head, just overtaken for the moment. Swear I'll let you know when I actually do anything about them, though.no subject
Date: 2008-02-05 06:47 pm (UTC)kay! however it turns out. I'm excited to see what you might end up with XD