Challenge 193: Destruction

[l-forevermore.livejournal.com]

Challenge: [193] Destruction
Title: The End
Word Count: 88 (Wow. That's really short for me.)
Notes: Um. It's dark. On another note, these challenges are perfect for getting the creative muses working, which means that I may actually finish half of the projects I've started. =D

Agony. It’s blinding, like sharp claws at his eyes, until he can see nothing but the darkness trying to take him, trying to pull him under, deeper into despair. It’s nothing but pure pain, and there isn’t any relief, won’t be any relief, because these creatures – no monsters under your bed – are the stuff that nightmares – but they’re just dreams, my dear – are made of. It aches and it burns, a poison, and everything is in anguish, his body, his soul, his-

Heart.

And another star blinks out.
 

Comments

[greedchan.livejournal.com]

o-o This isn't a world, is it? Or am I just reading too far into the body of the drabble + the last line?
nggggh I hate admitting when I can't figure a drabble out

[l-forevermore.livejournal.com]

Mm, I'm not sure myself... At one point in writing it, it was, but by the end I was somewhere between a world and a random victim of the Heartless... ^^; I think I managed to confuse myself!

Thank you for reading!

[darklight90.livejournal.com]

It was short but you captured the moment well :)

[l-forevermore.livejournal.com]

Late reply is late... Sorry!

I'm glad you thought so! Thank you for reading!