Challenge 196

[iki-teru.livejournal.com]

Title:Voiciferation
Challenge: 196- 50 words
Word Count: 50 (which was way harder than I thought it would be)
Notes: Yuffie is very hard to write under 300 words.



He was leaving again, without her. She glared at her bandaged arm, idiot. It was dangerous outside, moreso to try and fight alone.

"Give him a reason to come back." Aerith encouraged.

Yuffie jumped off her bed and ran down the hallway.

Leon looked surprised.

She cried, "I LOVE YOU STUPID!"

Comments

[breathless-dawn.livejournal.com]

Such a cute drabble! I can see Yuffie doing this. I can't help but wonder what Leon would say to that declaration, though... Hmm lol.

I love this! Great job, and kudos on the fifty words. I don't know if I could have kept Yuffie in check :)

[iki-teru.livejournal.com]

lol it was REALLY hard keeping it at fifty words. Especially since I always write Yuffie very verbose. I won't lie. I headdesked a few times trying to keep this on que. (and I too wonder what Leon's reaction is...)

But I'm so glad you like it! Thank you for your sweet comment! =)

[mishiru-shi.livejournal.com]

;__;
aww... t-this is so yuffie!

[iki-teru.livejournal.com]

xDD I'm so glad you think so!! Thank you!

[frostfromfire.livejournal.com]

How did you write them so perfectly in only fifty words? I must know your secret. *Is amazed.*

[iki-teru.livejournal.com]

I'm soo glad you think I wrote them well!! (the secret? As I wrote I staggered, I'd only write one line-do a word count, do another line-another word count. That way I had an idea of how much I had left to play with. It took a while to get it right.) *is glad you is amazed*