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[punjab-banks.livejournal.com]

challenge: [196] 50 words
title: first
wordcount: 50 of course :)
notes: saix/kairi


"Kiss me," he hisses, turns her face to his.

She does but - his lips are cold, his tongue dry. His hands on her mouth draw it into a leer and he laughs.

"Did you think it might be sweet?"

She shudders replies, and he likes how her heart beats fast.

Comments

[breathless-dawn.livejournal.com]

Oh, Saix, stop trying to scare the poor girl lol. She might run away.

Aaanyway, all humour aside, this was really wonderfully written. I could hear him saying everything in that deep creepy voice of his...oooh... Great job!

[punjab-banks.livejournal.com]

saix never heard that you catch more flies with honey then with...creeping. or something :) glad you liked it!