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[breathless-dawn.livejournal.com]

Challenge: [196] Fifty Words (second entry)
Title: Translucence
Word Count: 50
Notes: My second entry because I couldn't help myself... Namine and Repliku ftw! 
 

The good luck charm is a fake.

 

His memories are fabrications, merely lines of colour on paper.

 

He himself is nothing more than a laboratory experiment – a marionette, and she, the puppeteer.

 

But she can’t forget, she’s fake, too, and wonders if maybe two fakes can make them real.

Comments

[iki-teru.livejournal.com]

D: beyond amazing. Totally gave me chills (and this challenge is just too full of possibilities to not enter twice isn't it?)

[breathless-dawn.livejournal.com]

Thank you for your lovely comment! And yes, it totally is. I would probably enter a third time if the rules allowed it XD

[frostfromfire.livejournal.com]

OMG, THIS. I'm at a loss for words... just... incredible! I wish I could be more articulate, but the awesomeness of this has left me speechless.

[breathless-dawn.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much! And, you know, speechlessness is a great comment in and of itself :)

[demoerin.livejournal.com]

Why, why, why. These two are tragic.

[breathless-dawn.livejournal.com]

I know... Unfortunately, angst is my usual venue. I end up making myself sad a lot lol.

Thanks for the read and the comment!