Challenge 197

[nomu-sheriru.livejournal.com]

Challenge: [197] Second Chance
Word count: 176
Title:  Your Voice
Notes:  SPOILERS. Deals with KH2 ending.

 

 

We sat there helpless. Staring off into the neverending darkness, welcoming the cold, wet sand below us, I thought of you. The stillness of the air felt desperate and lonely.

Holding my head in my hands, a deep pain seered through my bones and I shivered. I wondered if we would ever see you again.

Then, in the distance, a white light appeared.

I walked towards it. I was so entrigued by its mysterious nature.

Being sucked into the abyss, we fell hard into water.

As confused and afraid as I was, I knew I couldn’t give up. Not yet.

I heard your voice. I did not realize how much I really missed it and the pain pulsating through me seized to exist.

I saw your smiling face. Tears ran down your cheeks.

Even after years of silence you reached out for me.

I then instantly regretted how I selfishly thought my power was wielded in my hands.

The most important weapons of all were with me all along: my heart, my friends and my love.

 

Comments

[kaos-sparrow.livejournal.com]

Hmm. Is it... Riku? It could be Sora, too. But I like Riku. This is very good- we don't see much in first person.

[nomu-sheriru.livejournal.com]

thank you so much :D
yeah I forgot to distinguish who it's really about but now that you think of it... i want to be one of those 'figure it out yourself' authors LOL which are annoying O_O