[identity profile] kaos-sparrow.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] kh_drabble
Title: Different
Challenge: [202] Smile
Word Count: 164
Notes: *does the dance of deadline-making*



It is a simple enough shape; one curve on the bottom, two on top. Why, then, can it convey so much?
Whenever Larxene’s lips curved upwards, it meant she had thought of some new torture to carry out in that little-girl voice. Only words- “Mustn’t hurt the toy!” Marluxia’s was used to unnerve her, to confuse. It was his weapon, that she never knew what would come next. DiZ was one of the “good guys”, but he treated her like little more than a toll, obsessed with bitter revenge. He was so convincing, she almost came to believe his opinion of her.
I was the only one to truly frighten her. The rest only let her recognize what she should feel, if she had a heart. His face was so empty. She had a feeling that if she ever looked in his eyes, Kingdom Hearts would look back. It used him for its own ends.

Then Naminé went home and learned how to smile.

Date: 2009-10-04 10:39 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] iki-teru.livejournal.com
pssst, I think you mean "knew" right there with the line: she never new what would come next.

Your opening line is made of win. Hell the entire thing is made of win. <3, so glad you made the deadline =)

Date: 2009-10-06 06:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darklight90.livejournal.com
Last line was epic!

Date: 2009-10-11 02:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zanypomegranate.livejournal.com
Wow. The last line really hit home. :)
And I really liked the first line too because it is so true/.

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