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Challenge: [206] Storm
Title: Beware of Low Flying Houses
Word Count: 150
Spoilers: None
Rating/Warnings: PG-13 for language.
Notes: Post-KH2, The wizard isn’t worth it. Really.



They stared at him wide-eyed.

"I'm sorry," Kairi said hurriedly, "we have to what?"

Sora forced a laugh as he tested the furniture, searching for something appropriately heavy and or bolted-down.

"We have to ride the tornado to get to OZ," he repeated with false joviality, "I thought I told you that."

"No, you didn't!"

Something outside, caught in the turbulent winds, hit the side of the farmhouse with enough force that the walls trembled. Riku glanced out the window and wished he hadn't, gaze caught by the funnel of storm clouds moving inexorably closer. He backed up, step by step, until Kairi grabbed his hand.

"You are dead," he told Sora. "Your ass is kicked."

Sora did another of those fake laughs, followed Riku’s gaze out the window and gulped. "Um... I think we should go climb in the bathtub." A chicken sailed past the window, clucking madly. “Now.

Date: 2009-11-03 11:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crazyemosrock.livejournal.com
Pure brillance!!
This drabble shows another idea of a world they can visit!!

Love the idea c:

Date: 2009-11-03 11:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dreamer1789.livejournal.com
XD Gotta love the last line. 1,000 Heartless? No prob. 1 turbulence-challenged chicken? Ok, now panic. ^^

Date: 2009-11-04 02:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kawaiigami.livejournal.com
Oh. Oh dear. XD

This gave me a "the characters were so themselves I had to laugh" moment of glee. :)

Date: 2009-11-04 03:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] greedchan.livejournal.com
LOL
LOL
LOL
I tried to comment on this with my cell phone earlier today, but my internet crapped out.
This was hilarious. xD I was sitting in the doctor's office waiting room and trying not to be too obnoxious.
"You are dead," he told Sora. "Your ass is kicked." This line killed me in the most amazing way.
:3 Good luck!

Date: 2009-11-04 04:28 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] fox_the_kitsune
*dies* Love it!

Date: 2009-11-04 08:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 06seconds-left.livejournal.com
How cute! This is funny! I especially like the last paragraph. :)

Date: 2009-11-04 04:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spoke.livejournal.com
Ooooh wow. Flashbacks to the end of the island much? Although at least it isn't dark out.

Hilariously awesome! XD

Date: 2009-11-10 02:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tabitha-dornoc.livejournal.com
*sputter* "Your ass is kicked." Heeeeeeeeeeee. I love these three sneaking off to other worlds post game, and you're always so good at writing it! And, you know, if Riku's elbow just happens to whack Sora in the nose as all three are scrambling into a tiny tub? Total accident!

Date: 2009-11-11 03:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fated-bliss.livejournal.com
Oh my god too adorable! I love how concise your writing is and how everyone's character shines through so well in spite of the length.

Rub-a-dub-dub, three men in a tub - the image kills.

Date: 2009-11-11 06:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darklight90.livejournal.com
Awesomeness! Last line was pure win :D

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