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challenge [216] once upon a time
title: anti-army girlfriend
wordcount: 193
notes: i was so beyond pissed by this one big thing in the new, bbs secret ending. grrr. so it's been quick-fixed here.
The letter Sora read was exciting. The King had promised new dangers and far-away places, a whole new set of adventures for anyone who would take them on.
Kairi knew exactly what to do first. She pulled the charm from her pocket and pressed it into Sora’s palm. “Hurry back,” she said, lightly.
He grinned awkwardly, uncertainty clear in his eyes. “Um, sure…but, you don’t have to wait—“
“Gosh, Sora. You’re still hopeless,” she said, half-closing her eyes in mock-exasperation. “I’m kidding. Seriously, kidding. I think I can use it like a Keychain, actually,” she explained, summoning her flowery Keyblade, and showing it to Sora. “I just don’t know how to put it on.”
Sora clipped the charm on, and the flowers became the white steel blades of the Oathkeeper Keyblade in an instant. “That’s cool,” he said, appreciatively – but he only had a second to admire her weapon, because she was very adamantly swinging it at the shadows under trees and in the leaves, daydreaming their adventures early, and thinking about how she had her heart and she was whole and she was ready to be in the story this time.
title: anti-army girlfriend
wordcount: 193
notes: i was so beyond pissed by this one big thing in the new, bbs secret ending. grrr. so it's been quick-fixed here.
The letter Sora read was exciting. The King had promised new dangers and far-away places, a whole new set of adventures for anyone who would take them on.
Kairi knew exactly what to do first. She pulled the charm from her pocket and pressed it into Sora’s palm. “Hurry back,” she said, lightly.
He grinned awkwardly, uncertainty clear in his eyes. “Um, sure…but, you don’t have to wait—“
“Gosh, Sora. You’re still hopeless,” she said, half-closing her eyes in mock-exasperation. “I’m kidding. Seriously, kidding. I think I can use it like a Keychain, actually,” she explained, summoning her flowery Keyblade, and showing it to Sora. “I just don’t know how to put it on.”
Sora clipped the charm on, and the flowers became the white steel blades of the Oathkeeper Keyblade in an instant. “That’s cool,” he said, appreciatively – but he only had a second to admire her weapon, because she was very adamantly swinging it at the shadows under trees and in the leaves, daydreaming their adventures early, and thinking about how she had her heart and she was whole and she was ready to be in the story this time.
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Date: 2010-02-08 08:09 pm (UTC)I APPROVE. AND I LIKE.
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Date: 2010-02-09 05:19 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-02-08 09:47 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-02-09 05:20 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-02-09 12:16 am (UTC)that ending it's like... giving us hints she's not fighting... again
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Date: 2010-02-09 05:22 am (UTC)dear kairi,
i want to like you, so please be interesting. friggin lame-o bella swan has led a more exciting life then you.
love e
buuut unfortunately it seems like her creators are determined to leave the ladies out. war be manly, yo.
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Date: 2010-02-09 05:28 am (UTC)Very cute, btw :3
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Date: 2010-02-09 05:42 am (UTC)but the idea that kairi will continue to be a boring token love interest is the biggest beef, for sure. the potential to be cool is there.
....long comment. basically, thank you! <3 <3
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Date: 2010-02-10 05:45 am (UTC)Yes, I also approve.
:D and <3
Secret Ending was so EPIC and POIGNANT and then...then...[headdesk]
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Date: 2010-02-10 10:37 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-02-10 11:21 pm (UTC)Come ooooon! Is Yuffie really the only girl who's going to fight evar? And seriously, she only had five seconds of fighting. What a disgrace... Step it up, KH, or you will force your fan base to do it for you.
^^' Sorry for the mini rant. Very good drabble, dear!
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Date: 2010-02-11 02:24 am (UTC)ah ha no worries, i can rant and rave. thanks for the comment!!
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Date: 2010-02-11 03:55 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-02-11 02:54 pm (UTC)